Sunday, August 29, 2010

Inspiration Sunday — Cheeky lines for Van Gogh Blue vodka

It's Sunday, and we could all use some inspiration before we go back to work or school or whatever it is we do on the days when having a Bloody Mary with brunch is frowned upon.

I love a great headline—and even more so if it makes me smirk—so I had to share this new campaign for Van Gogh Blue vodka by Engauge in Columbus, Ohio. It's playful, cheeky, and speaks to women without patronizing us. Love it. Wish I wrote it.

I first noticed this ad while flipping through a friend's copy of Chicago magazine. (I live in Austin, but Chicago is on my short list of post-grad-school destinations).


I really like how it's saucy without being vulgar.

When I searched online to find out who did the campaign, I found a New York Times article about it and an ad I like even more than the first.

Seriously, I may have to buy this vodka just to support the ads. 

Wednesday, August 25, 2010

Writer Wednesday — On Pause

Writer Wednesday is on pause this week because I worked a 12-hour day and am too drained to write more than this. It'll be back next week. In the meantime, if you're interested in being featured, I'd love to hear from you. Here's the info: 

Each Wednesday I feature a fellow writer, and not just ad folks. I’m interested in anyone who makes a living stringing together words. Their answers are unfiltered, so I may not always agree with every last bit of advice. After all, what works for one writer may not work for another. But we all need fresh ideas and perspectives to keep growing. Interested? Please email leigh@leighwritescopy.com.



Tuesday, August 24, 2010

Creative cross-pollination, or what I’ve learned about writing from unlikely sources

Grace Coddington
In The September Issue (which I highly recommend to any creative person, even if you aren’t into fashion), Vogue Creative Director Grace Coddington looks out the window of her taxi in Paris rather than hunching over a smart phone, as so many business travelers do.

She makes a point to do this everywhere because early in her career a mentor advised her to always look up and around for inspiration because you never knew when it would strike.

I agree wholeheartedly (even though I struggle to keep my iPhone tucked away). Not only does inspiration come from unlikely places, so do lessons about writing and creativity.

For example...

Cooking (or, hell, good eating)
Sweet is made interesting by adding spice, sour, or salt. Think Mexican hot chocolate or a salted caramel or Key Lime pie or, my recent favorite, the Mango Habanero Margarita at Takoba in Austin.

Photography

A photojournalist I worked with told me that the biggest difference between professional photographers and regular folks was that the professionals “take a hell of lot more pictures.”

Now, I don’t entirely believe that, but his point resonated with me. Want to get better at your craft? Do it more. Want to make sure you get the perfect shot? Take more shots. Want to make sure you get the perfect headline? Write more headlines.

Hair cuts

It’s much easier to trim than add more.

Fashion

Simple can be elegant, but there’s a fine line between that and boring. There is an equally fine line between elaborate and overwrought. In all cases, execution matters.

User Interface Design

It takes a lot more work on the back end to make things simple of the front end.

What have you learned about writing from unlikely sources?

Sunday, August 22, 2010

Inspiration Sunday — Hand-Carved Billboard in San Francisco

It's Sunday, and we could all use some inspiration before we go back to work or school or whatever it is we do on the days when having a Bloody Mary with brunch is frowned upon.

Back from more summer travels — this time a week San Francisco for work. I didn't see this billboard while I was there, but I wish I had. Spending ten days hand carving a billboard is a cool way to both get some attention and make a point.

Once carved, I don't think you can really tell it's done by hand, which is too bad. But I think the point is that folks walking and driving through this busy intersection saw it being worked on for ten days, and I'm sure there was some local news coverage and general buzz around it. It's not as cool as the Green Works Reverse Graffiti Project (also done in San Francisco), but it's still nice.


Advertising Agency: Juniper Park, USA
Partners, Executive Creative Directors: Terry Drummond, Alan Madill, Barry Quinn
Creative Director / Art Director: Hylton Mann
Creative Director / Copywriter: Andy Linardatos
Print Producer: Mark Prole
Props: Prop Art
Time lapse: Chad Richard
Illustrator: Gary Bullock

Wednesday, August 18, 2010

Writer Wednesday — Andy White of whitewriting — “If you believe in an idea, fight for it.”

Each Wednesday I feature a fellow writer, and not just ad folks. I’m interested in anyone who makes a living stringing together words. Their answers are unfiltered, so I may not always agree with every last bit of advice. After all, what works for one writer may not work for another. But we all need fresh ideas and perspectives to keep growing. Interested? Please email leigh@leighwritescopy.com.

Andy White is a freelance copywriter with a very amusing blog. (You can also find him on Facebook.) He’s based in Stockport, Manchester, England, and did his time at advertising behemoths like McCann Erickson and Publicis before going out on his own. And, now he’s doing his time here, giving advice to me and my readers. Thanks, Andy!

Website: whitewriting.com
Twitter: @thatandywhite


What’s your writing focus or specialty?
I don't really have a specialty these days, Leigh. I've been a copywriter for over 20 years now and I've covered just about every discipline in that time. If I focus on anything, it's having fun with the job. It keeps me happy and my clients seem to like having someone to work with who can have a few laughs while getting the work done. If there's one thing I'm known for it's probably writing in a conversational style and finding the right “tone of voice” for a piece.

Writers often take winding career paths. What led you here?

After leaving school I did a degree course in Graphic Design and Visual Communication. As I reached the end of that, I realised that what I really enjoyed was coming up with ideas, headlines and concepts, rather than perfect design. At the same time a Creative team from a London Ad agency visited the University to see our work and one of them suggested I started taking copywriting seriously. From that point on I basically knocked on doors and phoned every creative director I could get the number for. After a couple of months I was lucky enough to get to see a copywriter called Lynn Crooks at McCann Erickson, she didn't have a job for me but sent me away with a “copy test”, a set of fictitious briefs for non-existent clients. Stuff like “create a press campaign to sell tap water to compete with Perrier”, “Write a radio ad publicising the mime artist Marcel Marceau live at The Talk of The Town”, that kind of thing.

I spent another few months just creating my own campaigns and trying to get them seen at agencies. Eventually I got a couple of paid jobs from a small local agency and the third time they asked me to write something for them, I said I'd only do it if they gave me a full-time job. Fortunately they said yes. I'd been there about a year when Lynn from McCann's called me (I'd continued to harass her, naturally), and told me that they were now interviewing for writers. Went for the interview, got the job. After two years at McCann Erickson I felt that I was getting a little trapped so moved on and continued moving for a few years. About 15 years ago, tired of ad agency politics and wanting a bit more freedom, I decided to go freelance.

Tell us a little about your creative process.

The creative process for me is just looking at a brief and trying to get into the mindset of whomever the work will be talking to. Once I've got that, I'm happy.

What do you do when you’re stuck? Any tricks for getting unstuck?

I put some music on, wander around the house, smoke a cigarette (sorry) and try to get back into it. Sometimes I'll write “joke copy”. Basically throwing every ad cliche I can think of at the job and having fun with it. Once I've cleared my head, I try again.

Any side projects? If so, how do you make time for them?

For the past couple of years I've been playing with an idea for a series of children's books, (I know, I know, everyone's got a kids' book in them). There's always time to write, it's motivation that's the tricky bit. When you've been sitting at the pc writing about bollard renovation or producing a welcome letter for a mail order catalogue, it can be a bit hard to start writing again in your “own time”. With the books, I find myself coming up with pieces of dialogue or little scenarios when I'm watching TV or listening to music. I'll write them down, come back to them later and try to give them some kind of structure. The important thing to remember is that I'm doing it for me, (and my daughter), and that I do actually enjoy writing.

What’s the best writing advice you’ve been given?

The best lesson in writing I've ever had came from Lynn Crooks of McCann's. I'd been a “professional copywriter” for about a year by this point and felt that I was pretty hot stuff. I'd written a piece that utilised all my best tricks and cleverest thoughts and showed it to Lynn. This was of course in the days before we all had PCs so it was a neatly typed A4 page. Lynn took it, read it then crossed out almost every alternate line.

All the tricky bits had gone and what remained was brief, punchy and effective. Half the words, twice as good.

Thanks Lynn.

What’s one thing you know now that you’d wish you’d known at the beginning of your career?

That self belief is hugely important. Not to the exclusion of learning from others of course but not to let every piece of criticism sting or affect your confidence or your style. I spent some of my early years in advertising believing that everyone who'd been in the business longer than me would always be somehow more “right” than me.

No matter how long you've been writing, if you believe in an idea, fight for it. Keep your ears open to criticism as there's every chance you're wrong. Equally though, there's every chance that you're right.

Oh, and never throw an idea away. Keep them all “on file”, what doesn't work on a particular day for a particular job may be perfect in another time and place.


Sunday, August 15, 2010

Inspiration Sunday: Elegant storytelling via Google search

It's Sunday, and we could all use some inspiration before we go back to work or school or whatever it is we do on the days when having a Bloody Mary with brunch is frowned upon.

One of my favorite Super Bowl ads last year was Google's elegant, simple "Parisian Love". The most recent installment, "New Baby," is just as lovely. I love how this ad tells a clear and touching story with no voice over, no actors, and no fancy camera work. Enjoy!





Agency: Johannes Leonardo
Executive Creative Director: Jan Jacobs, Leo Premutico
Art Director: John Ortved, Emmie Nostitz, Ferdinando Verderi
Copywriter: John Ortved, Emmie Nostitz, Ferdinando Verderi
Agency Producer: Matthew Mattingly
Editorial Company: Lost Planet
Editor: Bruce Herrman
Music: Fall on Your Sword

Friday, August 13, 2010

Sharpie Liquid Pencil Review

When a nice Office Max cashier pointed out the new Sharpie Liquid Pencils last night, it felt like Christmas. I mean, how cool is a temporarily erasable Sharpie, especially for those of us who are messy and/or indecisive? To answer that question, here's my review, written in Sharpie Liquid Pencil

(Click to look closer.)


Close up of that spot I erased:

But, this may just be an issue for me. I write hard.

Thursday, August 12, 2010

Sorry, Barbara, Nike 'Fix' Works

Ad Week critic Barbara Lippert hates this Nike ad from Wieden + Kennedy. She calls it "smug, defensive," "holier-than-thou," and "off-putting at best."

I kinda love it. I think the tone is perfect for the brand. "This shoe works if you do." is a natural extension of "Just do it." It's direct and determined.  

And, really, those "toning" shoes she's so sensitive about? Maybe she wears them because they "feel good," but a lot of folks wear them hoping to get a workout running errands. If Nike can't poke fun at that, what can it poke fun of?  

The body copy reads: 
The Nike Trainer One is not a magical toning shoe. It's a training shoe. Its DiamondFLX technology activates your muscles to work how they're supposed to, giving you faster results from all those squats, lunges and classes that you do. So you get fit faster.


Wednesday, August 11, 2010

Writer Wednesday — Anthony Hewson of AH Copy

Each Wednesday I feature a fellow writer, and not just ad folks. I’m interested in anyone who makes a living stringing together words. Their answers are unfiltered, so I may not always agree with every last bit of advice. After all, what works for one writer may not work for another. But we all need fresh ideas and perspectives to keep growing. Interested? Please email leigh@leighwritescopy.com.

Anthony Hewson is a freelance copywriter based in Hitchin, Hertfordshire (about an hour north of London), and trading under the moniker AH Copy. When the call went out for interviewees, Anthony responded to my questions quickly—and offered a bit of editing advice for which I am very thankful.

Website: www.ahcopy.co.uk
Twitter: @ahcopywriter

What’s your writing focus or specialty?

I’m really a generalist writer. I do a fair amount of writing for architectural and construction firms simply because I spent a number of years working in PR and communications for one of the UK’s leading construction groups; but my freelance copywriting clients range from personal development specialists to helicopter charter companies, from management consultants to software houses.

Writers often take winding career paths. What led you here?

Aaah. Well, I went to university to study drama (acting and writing being my two main loves at school), but had to leave because of financial difficulties. I spent a few years working in IT recruitment for my parents’ company, doing a spot of freelance writing on the side, before landing a role at Kier Group, the UK construction and services company, working in the PR and communications department. That was always a stepping stone in my mind, while I continued to build up a decent freelance client base. I struck out on my own full-time a little over two years ago.

Tell us a little about your creative process.

The first step is of course to get under the skin of the client. Get to grips with their service offering or products; what distinguishes them from their competitors; what their ethos is and who they really are as people.

Then move on to who they want to talk to, attract and engage with. At this point, unless the client has already been hugely organised, I’m in a much better position to establish a detailed brief for the job.

After that there’ll be a spot of research, including their rivals, their industry as a whole, and SEO keyword analysis if appropriate.

Then it’s pen to paper or fingers to keyboard and see which words fall out of my head! A single round of revisions is usually enough to achieve a finished piece.

What do you do when you’re stuck? Any tricks for getting unstuck?

Depends on the nature of the ”stuck”. If it’s finding the right word, digging out Roget’s Thesaurus might loosen the blockage. If it’s more than that, perhaps some more research or just getting away from the job. It’s surprising how many ideas come to you when you’re doing something mundane like the washing-up.

Any side projects? If so, how do you make time for them?

Several. And the answer for the most part is that I don’t. I came up with a charity concept a couple of years ago: www.small-change.org.uk, which gets my attention any time I’m nowhere near the computer, and very little when I am. There are a couple of novels I started a long time back, feeling unloved and untouched, and I’ve done a couple of voiceover jobs too.

What’s the best writing advice you’ve been given?

“Make your sentences shorter.” I love rhythmic language, setting a scene, emotion, passion and telling a story. There’s not actually room in copywriting for a lot of that; most of the best copywriting is actually very plain, simple and direct. Note that I say best copywriting, not best writing — so feature articles and longer pieces demand a very different, and for me at any rate, more natural style of writing.

Sunday, August 8, 2010

Inspiration Sunday: Canada Edition

It's Sunday, and we could all use some inspiration before we go back to work or school or whatever it is we do on the days when having a Bloody Mary with brunch is frowned upon.

I just got back from a fun but exhausting jaunt to Niagara Falls for a wedding. I'm pretty zonked, so this will be short. But, in honor of my visit to Canada, here are some fun ads for the very strange sounding Canadian Cheese Rolling Festival.


Advertising Agency: TAXI Vancouver, Canada
Creative Director: Jordan Doucette
Art Director: Dan Bache
Copywriter: Will Seccombe
Photographer: Hans Sipma
Photoshop: Steve Pinter

Thursday, August 5, 2010

Visual ads for word geeks

Like every writer I know, I heart Scrabble. And, I generally love ads for Scrabble as there have been quite of few great ones in recent years. These from Ogilvy in Mumbai made me grin this morning. 

The tag is: The Surprising Power of Words




Advertising Agency: Ogilvy & Mather, Mumbai, India
National Creative Directors: Abhijit Avasthi, Rajiv Rao
Executive Creative Director: Sumanto Chattopadhyay
Creative Directors: Sukesh Kumar Nayak, Heeral Desai Akhaury
Copywriters: Sukesh Kumar Nayak, Ragini Singh
Art Directors: Heeral Desai Akhaury, Pushkar Shintre

Check out everything from Scrabble at Adsoftheworld.com.

Tuesday, August 3, 2010

What makes a great tagline?

Reading Forbes’ list of the 25 Best-Loved Advertising Taglines* got me thinking about what makes a great tagline. I know this is basic advertising stuff, but it’s smart to think about the basics now and again (and I’m still a student, so it’s kind of my job to think about this stuff).

Size doesn’t really matter. 
Most say tags need to be short: Just Do It. But a lot of the great ones are lengthy: There Are Some Things Money Can't Buy. For Everything Else, There's MasterCard.

Efficiency does. 
Every word in a tagline should serve a purpose. In the MasterCard example, I might be tempted to cut off that first “There Are,” but it has a nice rhythm to it.

Make it memorable, if nothing else. 
One of the best examples: See something, say something. Now used in a lot of cities, the slogan was launched by the NYC Metropolitan Transportation Authority in 2003. And, it’s what the t-shirt vendor who helped thwart an attempted car bombing in Times Square earlier this year told reporters.

Have some attitude. 
Don’t Mess with Texas is one of my favorite examples because it just sounds so darn Texan. But attitude doesn’t have to be tough. It just needs to capture the distinct voice of the company.
  • Damn Right Your Dad Drank It (Canadian Club) is brash and unapologetic.
  • Does she or doesn’t she? (Clairol) has intrigue and allure.
  • We try harder (Avis) is self-deprecating and scrappy.
  • Cotton. The fabric of our lives give a sense of nostalgia.

And an ownable message.  
Who else but YouTube can say: Broadcast Yourself ? Likewise, Talk to Chuck couldn’t be used by anyone but Charles Schwab.

Keep it simple and clear. 
Nothing will kill a tagline like jargon. No one should have to figure out what your tag means. A simple tag that works: You’re in good hands with Allstate.

Being clever never hurts. 
Word play, rhyming, and alliteration help because tags that are fun to say get said more often.
  • Our food is fresh. Our customers are spoiled. (Fresh Direct)
  • It takes a lickin', but keeps on tickin'. (Timex)
  • Click it or ticket.  (National Highway Traffic Safety Administration)

What are your favorite tags? What makes them great?

Check out more great tags at TaglineGuru™.

Sunday, August 1, 2010

Inspiration Sunday: TDA Advertising & Design for FirstBank

It's Sunday, and we could all use some inspiration before we go back to work or school or whatever it is we do on the days when having a Bloody Mary with brunch is frowned upon.

I wish there were one of these in every airport. But, alas, only travelers at Denver International Airport will benefit from TDA Advertising & Design’s rotating ad for FirstBank.

It’s part of their “We're here to help” campaign, and I love its simple humor almost as much as I love it when kids sleep on flights.  



Client: FirstBank
Creative Director: Jonathan Schoenberg
Creative Director: Thomas Dooley
Art Director: Neal Desai
Copywriter: Jeremy Seibold
Copywriter: Joe Nafziger